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In Plain Sight by Victopet
mvansand76:
In Plain Sight is a crossover between the movie Witness and BBM. It's got great dialogue and an interesting storyline with Ennis as an Amish man and Jack as a streetwise cop.
http://victopet.livejournal.com
Her journal is friendslocked now, so you have to ask her to be friended...
mariez:
Chapters 11 and 12 are now up.
Yes, the dialogue is very strong - whether its Amish!Ennis, toughcopwithsoftheart!Jack or even little Samuel. And she gives Ennis's character such respect - he's naive, but very smart. And his feelings and struggles are never treated with condescension. I find the idea of this Ennis being drawn to this Jack especially enticing.
Not to mention the murder and the mystery surrounding Ennis's brother, K.E. which are interesting by themselves
Marie
yb:
--- Quote from: mariez on July 27, 2007, 04:24:34 pm ---Chapter 13 is now up.
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Marie, a little correction there. Vic has posted 2 chapters today - chapter 11 & 12. It may be a while until we get another update because Vic is starting a new job. But great chapters as always, and she left us with a cliffhanger.
mariez:
--- Quote from: yb on July 28, 2007, 01:20:07 am ---Marie, a little correction there. Vic has posted 2 chapters today - chapter 11 & 12. It may be a while until we get another update because Vic is starting a new job. But great chapters as always, and she left us with a cliffhanger.
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Thanks for catching that, yb! I'll correct my post. Yes, she took me by surprise when I saw that she posted another chapter so quickly.
SPOILERS
It was a great cliffhanger, wasn't it? - we are off and running with this story now. Wonderful characters and a suspenseful plot. I imagine that being forced into hiding with a wounded Jack can't help but bring more of Ennis's feelings to the surface.... and Jack's too.
Marie
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: mariez on July 28, 2007, 12:50:28 pm ---Thanks for catching that, yb! I'll correct my post. Yes, she took me by surprise when I saw that she posted another chapter so quickly.
SPOILERS
It was a great cliffhanger, wasn't it? - we are off and running with this story now. Wonderful characters and a suspenseful plot. I imagine that being forced into hiding with a wounded Jack can't help but bring more of Ennis's feelings to the surface.... and Jack's too.
Marie
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Have you guys seen Witness? I have, about 10 times, so I can't think of this story without thinking of:
* Harrison Ford singing Sam Cooke's What a wonderful world this would be to Kelly McGillis.
* The building the barn scene
* Rachel bringing Book the lemonade while he is all sweaty and building a new birdhouse...
:D
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