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In Plain Sight by Victopet
mariez:
Chapter 21 of IPS is up!
http://victopet.livejournal.com/18373.html
SPOILERS
Excellent pacing. Despite the awkwardness, these two can't help but fall into a comfortable rhythm as they start to open up with, and learn from, each other. An intriguing conversation about Kurt - and an intriguing and troubling conversation with Randall.
And, yes, it looks like Jack will be staying with Ennis a while longer!
Marie
RouxB:
I was so happy tp see IPS :D I had been wondering what was to become of it so-yippee. That cliff hanger we were left on was high and heady-one of the hottest chaps ever written. Yikes! I am truly curious about how this story will resolve itselft.
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belbbmfan:
I hadn't expected this update. What a wonderful surprise!
I agree about the pacing. It feels right, very comfortable, just like Jack feels with Ennis. How sad that Ennis didn't understand how anybody could be comfortable around him :-\.
And the conversation about Kurt had me thinking too. Was there any reference earlier in the story that Jack might have met Kurt? I don't think so...
Maybe I should go reread a few chapters :)
This is a great read!
mariez:
Chapter 22 is up!
http://victopet.livejournal.com/18499.html
And victopet said "More is on its way....." :)
Marie
mariez:
As promised....Chapters 23 and 24!
http://victopet.livejournal.com/18756.html
http://victopet.livejournal.com/19172.html
Authors' Note: Hi again. Here's yet another update to IPS. I'm finding that writing shorter chapters is easier to manage, so I am trying something new. Yes, there's still more after this.
Marie
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