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In Plain Sight by Victopet

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mariez:
Chapter 27 is up (and the promise of "more on the way")!

http://victopet.livejournal.com/19767.html


SPOILERS



This story keeps getting better and better.  I thought the dialogue in this chapter was masterful.  And the closing paragraph is gorgeous - they're falling in love.   :)

Marie

mariez:
Chapter 28!

http://victopet.livejournal.com/20033.html  :)

Author's note:...I've got the next chapter almost ready and I hope to be posting it shortly....


Another terrific chapter - her pacing is spot on.  They're just about to have "the talk" about Kurt so the next chapter should answer some questions (and maybe raise a few more?) 

Marie

mariez:
Chapters 29 and 30 are up!

Authors' Note:  Hi everyone -- It's been very slow going for me with the writing -- work and the family are quite hectic.  But I have 12 days off between the holidays and am hoping to crank out a few chapters.  This one is probably rated PG, but this and the next will go far to explaining a lot of different things and setting the stage for how our boys relate from here on out.  Happy Reading -- and once again, sorry for the long delay. For those of you still reading,  let me know what you think.

Vic


http://victopet.livejournal.com/20488.html?#cutid1

http://victopet.livejournal.com/20848.html?#cutid1


Marie

Monika:
as well as chapter 31!

http://victopet.livejournal.com/21134.html?#cutid1


You could cut the tension between them with a knife...

Monika:
I sure hope Victopet will update soon....she´s driving me crazy! :laugh:

I´ve been refreashing my friends page on LJ several times today. I´m a bit eager ;D

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