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ifyoucantfixit:



         Scott.  This was indeed a glance behind the curtains.  A short and learning glance inside the DelMar family.  The mother doing all she can to nurture and protect the siblings.  Her trying not to show the partiality to the youngest and most vulnerable.  The sister also trying to become a guardian in her own way.
I personally identify very much with the girl.  Being the oldest, and having two younger brothers as well.  Its a role you fall into, without thinking about it.
         Very well done.  And like Marie, I too think it is great as a stand alone piece.  Good Job.                                                                   janice

moremojo:
I really appreciate your sweet feedback, Janice! :-*

Maybe I do have some future as a slash/fanfic writer! 8)

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