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Hoping to Be Human

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Daniel:
I was sure that my last one was too long.... but it finished out nicely.

I am in the lotus flower.
Its petals surround me.
And through the diaphanous
fibers I can sense the light and be
A thousand crystal shadows
glimmer on a frozen sea.
And I sit here within this bud;
its all refracted in me.

MaineWriter:
Welcome Scott and Daniel...glad to have you here!

Leslie, acting slightly like a moderator

mariez:
Wow - thanks to both of you, Scott and Daniel, for sharing these profoundly beautiful writings.  You've both given me a lot of ponder as I go through my day .... I love that! More, please....

Marie

moremojo:
Bilious belly
Fetid fumes
Bouquet of body
O'er small room looms
Many sneer and judge
Casting disapproving look
But I welcome and embrace
The perfume that you cook.

Daniel:
Flailing in the failing winds,
Raging against rapids,
A breath of scent envelops us -
Gentles mental madness.
Raiment of angelic aura
Awaft from sense to sense.
Never knowing, nor upholding
Concerns par excellence.
Eau de dream of moments kept.

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