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Cellar Scribblings
Lynne:
Chuckie - I think the script for your video is excellent. Combining that with your personality, which I've no doubt will shine through on video, will be a success. Go for it!!
:-*
CellarDweller:
Trial run of the video is done!
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,46309.msg588699.html#msg588699
dejavu:
I like it a lot, and I like the line that you added about why you didn't go ahead with a suicide attempt: because you thought of how your family would react.
That rings so true for me. I have memories of some unhappy times in my own youth, and that was the big "pause" button that someone up there must have been pressing on my behalf. I thought about my own family, and how they would react.
You look good and sound good. If you were to do anything differently on a second run-through, it might be to speak a little more slowly. If you felt a little nervous, it might have rushed your delivery. But I think this one is just fine, if you want to just go with it as the most "natural."
I'm proud to listen to you and see you.
dejavu:
P.S. I listened to it again and really like it just the way it is.
brianr:
Excellent. I felt it was better than when I read it. Perhaps it was the accent ;D
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