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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
mariez:
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Ha! Maybe Ellery should've hired Edna as the new server/bouncer! LOL! Very funny how Wayne changed his tune from "He even finds me kinda hot..." to "...loves me like his own ... nephew. Or somethin.”
Uh, yeah. Or somethiin. :laugh: :laugh:
The Brown ranch is looking more and more like an ideal place for the twins. ;)
Yep, Fabienne - I had a lot of fun reading that, too! :D
Thanks,
Marie
mariez:
Oh, my - Nicky looks like he means business!
“Time we had a little fun ourselves. Chain ya to the bed, give you a nice spankin an then ride you like a racehorse. What a ya say?”
louisev:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on February 26, 2008, 08:00:41 am ---
“Uh... ma’am?” Wayne blinked at the receiver. “Ain’t Ellery there?”
:laugh: :laugh:
I want to see the look on his face!!
OMG Louise, that conservation between Wayne and Edna was just hilarious! And exactly what he needed!
You must have had fun writing that.
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Can you tell I had fun reading it? :D
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Wayne had no traction with Edna whatsoever! And yes, I did have fun! Wayne is always a bucket of surprises.
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 26, 2008, 02:41:38 pm ---Oh, my - Nicky looks like he means business!
“Time we had a little fun ourselves. Chain ya to the bed, give you a nice spankin an then ride you like a racehorse. What a ya say?”
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poor old Jeremy is starting to feel like a rookie in the bedroom again!
souxi:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on February 26, 2008, 02:49:25 pm ---poor old Jeremy is starting to feel like a rookie in the bedroom again!
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So does this mean that Licky Nicky will be giving Jeremy some more "lessons" tonight then Louise? :laugh:
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