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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
belbbmfan:
Congratulations on finishing yet another Greenlea story I enjoyed reading very much Louise! Thank you so much.
Fabienne :-*
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on February 28, 2008, 01:59:32 pm ---.... For the time being the girls are right were they should be, under Wes and Edna's watchfull eye.
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Absolutely! They coudn't be in better hands - I dare say even Laura would have a hard time objecting to Edna......and as I typed those words it occurred to me that that would be a really, really interesting meeting! LOL!
--- Quote from: souxi on February 28, 2008, 01:53:05 pm ---....... Do you remember some of my comments about them in The Long Way Home Louise? Especailly when they barged in on our boys in bed!!! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Oh they did get on my tits BIG time. >:( Well they,d better bloody well behave themselves whilst they are here and not pester Colson too much. .....
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:laugh: :laugh: Oh, do I ever remember, souxi! We may have to get you some of Ellery's meditation tapes now that the girls are in town!
Mare
souxi:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on February 28, 2008, 02:07:09 pm ---Congratulations on finishing yet another Greenlea story I enjoyed reading very much Louise! Thank you so much.
Fabienne :-*
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Yes well done indeed Louise and thank you. Hey I had an idea lol. Once you,ve done writing about the girls, you can do the honeymoon, come on our boys deserve it lol, and THEN I thought, (nearer christmas mind you) how about a story with everyone, Colson, Ellery and the girls, AND Jeremy and Nick, having christmas dinner at Wes and Edna,s but with Aunt Julia as a guest of honour. :o :o OMG that would be a riot lol. Remember her priceless comments at the last dinner our boys went too? She was so awful, I couldn,t beleive some of the things she said. fgs. And just imagine if, God forbid, because of this terrible rape, poor Pam ended up pregnant. Can you imagine what Aunt Julia would have to say about that :o Don,t bear thinking about lol. Just an evil thought anyway. :laugh: :laugh:
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 28, 2008, 02:12:11 pm ---Absolutely! They coudn't be in better hands - I dare say even Laura would have a hard time objecting to Edna......and as I typed those words it occurred to me that that would be a really, really interesting meeting! LOL!
Mare
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Oh, yes. We need this meeting. And so does Laura. I can't hate her, even though her behavior is very upsetting. There's too much history there.
louisev:
well Soux... one thing I can tell you is that it is not in my plan to have Pam end up pregnant from the attack. I like to try to stay within the bounds of realism and while it is always possible that unprotected sex leads to pregnancy, any given moment in time fertility ranges about 20% so it is a 1 in 5 chance. (at least that is what I remember - Leslie our medical expert might correct me on that!) but no I had never er, conceived, of further repercussions for Pam that way. However, any issues to do with rape tend to get under Jeremy's skin, which we may see come up later in the "Grey Girls."
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