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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on July 13, 2008, 01:14:41 pm ---ok now did I manage to outthink anybody? heheheh
Chapter 60: http://louisev.livejournal.com/272882.html
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*waves hand* Yep, you outthought me! A great surprise to see Jeremy. I've missed him! Jeremy was stoic about being shot in the chest, and he didn't hesitate before jumping into a burning car to save a life, but ringing Ellery and Colson's doorbell when he knows he's probably "interrupting" them? Now, that's courage! LOL! Poor Jeremy.
And why do I think Colson calling Laura is a very bad idea?
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
it"s always a very bad idea!
louisev:
and here is chapter 61!!!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/272951.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
Louise, you totally rock!!!! LOL! How many times will I be saying 'I didn't see that coming!" I didn't think Laura sent the PI's - too obvious - but I never would have guessed Steve, and I really wouldn't have guessed what he was thinking!
“Not half as excitin as your life with Colson, Chief. I swear.”
You said it, Jeremy! Although, I know they could both do with less excitement of that kind.
But.....where does this leave Laura? It appears that her husband is not only cheating on her, he's conspiring against her - and not only in her imagination. She really does appear to be alone in the world.
Great job, Louise - thanks!
Marie
louisev:
I figured I must have really out-thought you on that one, Marie! heheh.
But that is a very good question - where does that leave Laura?
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