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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
louisev:
and here is chapter 8:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/258808.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on March 06, 2008, 11:06:29 pm ---and here is chapter 8:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/258808.html
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SPOILER
I want to be Edna when I grow up. :)
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
I sure hope Fabienne doesn't miss her breakfast and get disappointed! hee hee.
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on March 06, 2008, 05:13:24 pm ---I can't get enough of being told how much you love my stories, Fabienne!! so don't worry about repeating yourself!
I'll try to make the next chapter worth skipping breakfast for!
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hehehe, I thought about it. But what would Edna say if I sat here in my pajamas? :o
And no Louise, I wasn't disappointed! No way. I hope everyone is paying close attention to what Edna's saying and how she's saying it. She's giving free lessons here.
“I think it was a good idea, actually,” Edna said, and closed the distance between herself and Laura, taking her arm gently. Laura flinched but did not pull away from the older woman’s touch. “You sound real hurt, and maybe it’s about time ta get a few things said. Just because we are friends – good friends – with Colson don’t mean we can’t be yer friend too. Laura, is it?”
Laura nodded, momentarily dumb. Katie Ann stared at her mother in shock as she let herself be steered to the sofa. Colson watched surreptitiously as he picked up his cup, and Edna sat down next to her.
Yep, that's exactly what Laura needed to hear! It seems to me that Laura hasn't had a friend in a very long time, and it made her bitter.
The world needs more Ednas! :)
:) :)
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on March 07, 2008, 02:45:31 am ---The world needs more Ednas! :)
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It sure does - and in high places! ;D
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