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louisev:
and here is chapter 14 for a changeup!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/260109.html

mariez:

--- Quote from: frantic65 on March 12, 2008, 03:24:07 pm ---.. I think Ellery would send them off to a vacation on their own anywhere else in the damn world to avoid a Grey Family Vacation!!
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LOL!  This is true - what is the furthest geographical point from Puerto Rico? 


SPOILERS - Chapter 14



I'm feeling Ellery and Paula's pain.  It's a frustrating "game" for sure.  Effin' Amos.  But he can only run so long. 
Glad to see that Ellery kept his cool  - it's never too late for any of us to learn and change.  And I was really glad to see the truce between Ellery and Paula continue and expand.  Having Pam talk to Paula is an excellent move - and a very interesting one!  As always, a fascinating and complicated set of dynamics. 

Thanks, Louise!
Marie

opinionista:

--- Quote from: mariez on March 13, 2008, 01:40:09 pm ---LOL!  This is true - what is the furthest geographical point from Puerto Rico? 

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Probably Hawaii.

louisev:
next stop, chapter 15

http://louisev.livejournal.com/260601.html

mariez:
SPOILERS








Remind me never to tell Edna a secret! LOL!! 

But I do understand the fine line here and the trickle-down effect of Laura's pregnancy on the entire situation, which has moved beyond complicated.   

...Edna I think is tryin ta think a the right casserole ta bake for wartime.”

LOL!  There's a new cookbook idea!

Great story, Louise! Thanks,
Marie

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