Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3252232 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2760 on: June 07, 2007, 05:13:18 pm »
Ennis killed Elk instead of a Sheep
They had tons of meat in a giant heap.
And after that day...
No more beans, no way!



Okay I hope I salvaged the limerick alittle...  Anke? lol


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2761 on: June 07, 2007, 05:18:23 pm »
Ennis killed Elk instead of a Sheep
They had tons of meat in a giant heap.
And after that day:
No more beans, no way!
Just their love, so honest and deep!

 :)

Okay I hope I salvaged the limerick alittle...  Anke? lol

Sure ya did!  :laugh:

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2762 on: June 07, 2007, 05:23:36 pm »
What an odd little limerick we got there..  ;D
Okay, shall we start another?


Ennis crept out of the tent at the crack of dawn


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2763 on: June 07, 2007, 05:42:36 pm »
Ennis crept out of the tent at the crack of dawn,
Hoping Jack would stay asleep till he was long gone

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2764 on: June 08, 2007, 12:11:57 pm »
Ennis crept out of the tent at the crack of dawn,
Hoping Jack would stay asleep till he was long gone.
He wanted to run and hide his shame,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2765 on: June 08, 2007, 02:54:46 pm »
Ennis crept out of the tent at the crack of dawn,
Hoping Jack would stay asleep till he was long gone.
He wanted to run and hide his shame,
But too late. Jack had woken up and he came. 


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2766 on: June 08, 2007, 03:34:17 pm »
Ennis crept out of the tent at the crack of dawn,
Hoping Jack would stay asleep till he was long gone.
He wanted to run and hide his shame,
But too late. Jack had woken up and he came.
Ennis foolishly fled, 'stead of jumping Jack's bones....



(Sorry for the somewhat less than poetic ending.   :-X )

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2767 on: June 08, 2007, 03:54:24 pm »
Ennis crept out of the tent at the crack of dawn,
Hoping Jack would stay asleep till he was long gone.
He wanted to run and hide his shame,
But too late. Jack had woken up and he came.
Ennis foolishly fled, 'stead of jumping Jack's bones....
Then poor Jack was left to beat his wash on the stones


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2768 on: June 08, 2007, 04:51:49 pm »


      Time and again they met to go fish??



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2769 on: June 08, 2007, 09:20:07 pm »
Time and again they met to go fish
And feasted on love so delish