Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3251510 times)

Offline ifyoucantfixit

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2780 on: June 09, 2007, 02:53:56 pm »

        Cute i like it

     Jack had to commute four hours a day
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2781 on: June 10, 2007, 01:11:10 pm »
Jack had to commute four hours a day
And he hated it more than he could say!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2782 on: June 11, 2007, 12:53:09 am »
               Jack had to commute four hours a day
               And he hated it more than he could say!
               He rode the bay mare, and carried the rifle



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2783 on: June 12, 2007, 05:31:56 pm »
Jack had to commute four hours a day
And he hated it more than he could say!
He rode the bay mare, and carried the rifle,
His longing for main camp and Ennis no trifle!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2784 on: June 12, 2007, 05:36:57 pm »

Jack had to commute four hours a day
And he hated it more than he could say!
He rode the bay mare, and carried the rifle,
His longing for main camp and Ennis no trifle!
and he couldn't wait to get back to Ennis and "play".


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2785 on: June 13, 2007, 11:52:12 am »
Awesome, moving along...  :)


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2786 on: June 13, 2007, 01:23:29 pm »
Ok then....


In the rodeos, Jack Twist had no luck


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2787 on: June 13, 2007, 01:28:33 pm »
Awesome, moving along...  :)

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I could have sworn I posted a new line for the next limerick in that post.  Apparently not..lol..
Ok, on with the show..




In the rodeos, Jack Twist had no luck
He was good, I mean, he didn't totally suck.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2788 on: June 13, 2007, 01:36:05 pm »



In the rodeos, Jack Twist had no luck
He was good, I mean, he didn't totally suck.
'till he met Ennis, the ranch hand


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2789 on: June 13, 2007, 03:02:44 pm »
In the rodeos, Jack Twist had no luck
He was good, I mean, he didn't totally suck.
'till he met Ennis, the ranch hand
with a body tall, supple and tanned