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Offline Delmardeb

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2990 on: August 11, 2007, 10:57:55 pm »
Jack fell off of the bull with a thud
He knew this rodeo round was a dud
and he saw a young coyote called Jed
it reminded him of one Ennis killed dead
Regardless of Jack's blunders, he's still our bud.





For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2991 on: August 11, 2007, 11:01:51 pm »
The dozy embrace was romantic


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2992 on: August 12, 2007, 01:14:41 am »

The dozy embrace was romantic
And Ennis enjoyed  all of Jacks antics
       



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2993 on: August 12, 2007, 08:09:36 am »

The dozy embrace was romantic
And Ennis enjoyed  all of Jacks antics
and those nights in the tent


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2994 on: August 12, 2007, 11:20:26 am »
The dozy embrace was romantic
And Ennis enjoyed  all of Jacks antics
and those nights in the tent
left them sweaty and spent

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2995 on: August 12, 2007, 02:44:28 pm »
The dozy embrace was romantic
And Ennis enjoyed  all of Jacks antics
and those nights in the tent
left them sweaty and spent
since their sleeping bag share mode was tantric.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2996 on: August 12, 2007, 05:08:34 pm »
Quote
The dozy embrace was romantic
And Ennis enjoyed  all of Jacks antics
and those nights in the tent
left them sweaty and spent
since their sleeping bag share mode was tantric.


oooooh!  Brilliant and sexy last line, Mikaela!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2997 on: August 12, 2007, 05:24:09 pm »
Merci, cherie!  :)


Another one:

The elk meat was juicy and tasty

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2998 on: August 12, 2007, 11:17:17 pm »
The elk meat was juicy and tasty
They hung it and dried it; no wasty





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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2999 on: August 12, 2007, 11:36:03 pm »
The elk meat was juicy and tasty
They hung it and dried it; no wasty
Their hunger satisfied and sated,
Six-word Stories:  ~Jack: Lightning Flat, lightning love, flat denied   ~Ennis: Open space: flat tire, tire iron?