Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3389698 times)

Offline mariez

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3640 on: September 27, 2008, 11:19:06 am »
No ones business, but ours, Jack said
Sensing Ennis's mood of dread
Ennis said, "I aint queer"
His message ringing loud and clear
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3641 on: September 28, 2008, 03:46:51 am »


No ones business, but ours, Jack said
Sensing Ennis's mood of dread
Ennis said, "I aint queer"
His message ringing loud and clear
A wrastle, and roll, Ennis's nose bled.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3642 on: September 29, 2008, 09:51:25 pm »
*comes in to change the direction once again*


As a bottom, Jack Twist was the best


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3643 on: September 29, 2008, 09:59:58 pm »
As a bottom, Jack Twist was the best
On his back, feeling Ennis's chest
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3644 on: September 29, 2008, 10:05:00 pm »

As a bottom, Jack Twist was the best
On his back, feeling Ennis's chest
He clenched ever so lightly


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3645 on: September 29, 2008, 10:07:35 pm »
As a bottom, Jack Twist was the best
On his back, feeling Ennis's chest
He clenched ever so lightly
Squeezing ever so tightly
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3646 on: September 29, 2008, 10:36:37 pm »
As a bottom, Jack Twist was the best
On his back, feeling Ennis's chest
He clenched ever so lightly
Squeezing ever so tightly
As they both tried to reach the crest
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3647 on: September 30, 2008, 02:58:26 am »
They lay together in the afterglow
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3648 on: September 30, 2008, 08:25:15 am »
They lay together in the afterglow
body heat was warming the snow


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3649 on: September 30, 2008, 12:54:58 pm »
They lay together in the afterglow
body heat was warming the snow
It felt like they were flying in the mountain air
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain