Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3263382 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5540 on: January 02, 2010, 12:20:38 pm »

They were always apart when each new year came
and that made them feel full of shame

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5541 on: January 02, 2010, 12:29:12 pm »
They were always apart when each new year came
and that made them feel full of shame
Finally, Jack gave up his hopes

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5542 on: January 02, 2010, 12:39:00 pm »
They were always apart when each new year came
and that made them feel full of shame
Finally, Jack gave up his hopes
and decided to take Ennis and elopes

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5543 on: January 02, 2010, 12:58:08 pm »
They were always apart when each new year came
and that made them feel full of shame
Finally, Jack gave up his hopes
and decided to take Ennis and elopes
but that didn't happen, who is to blame?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5544 on: January 02, 2010, 01:00:09 pm »
If Jack hadn't got a flat tire, how would it all have ended?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5545 on: January 02, 2010, 01:38:52 pm »

If Jack hadn't got a flat tire, how would it all have ended?
with them keeping everything closed up and defended

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5546 on: January 02, 2010, 01:40:59 pm »
If Jack hadn't got a flat tire, how would it all have ended?
with them keeping everything closed up and defended
Would Ennis ever have torn his walls down?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5547 on: January 02, 2010, 02:13:14 pm »
If Jack hadn't got a flat tire, how would it all have ended?
with them keeping everything closed up and defended
Would Ennis ever have torn his walls down?
yes and then it would be a real showdown

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5548 on: January 02, 2010, 03:02:48 pm »
If Jack hadn't got a flat tire, how would it all have ended?
with them keeping everything closed up and defended
Would Ennis ever have torn his walls down?
yes and then it would be a real showdown
Is it possible that their lives and hearts could have been mended?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5549 on: January 02, 2010, 03:04:04 pm »
LOL @ the totally Swedish limerick!   ;)

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