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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on November 23, 2008, 05:35:08 pm ---However, I think it is fair to say that outside the bedroom (and even sometimes IN the bedroom) there is nothing passive or submissive about Ellery the rest of the time, and in fact his role in the relationship in general is one of assuming the upper hand more often than not. What do the rest of you think?
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I think I agree completely! :) I've never understood why many people believe that the "submissive streak that manifests itself in sexual tastes" as you so eloquently put it, is a sign of "weakness" in a person. :-\ That's never made any sense to me. And I also don't believe you can necessarily tell what kind of sexual tastes a person has just by viewing their public persona.
Now, as for Chapter 25....
SPOILERS
Yeah, I liked the "Colson shower" line, too! And Ellery is incorrigible, isn't he? :laugh: This was a great example of Ellery "assuming the upper hand" in classic Ellery style! Great stuff, Louise. Thanks!
Marie
louisev:
Ellery is being his incorrigible best, considering he has a limited amount of crime to deal with. But what crime he DOES have, he is certainly taking over the investigation now!
And I'm glad he is perceived as just as ornery and pushy as I portray him, because that is the whole point of Ellery's personality!
louisev:
Ellery manages to get Colson to take another chance...!
Chapter 26: http://louisev.livejournal.com/282450.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on November 28, 2008, 09:54:00 pm ---Ellery manages to get Colson to take another chance...!
Chapter 26: http://louisev.livejournal.com/282450.html
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SPOILERS
Win the trifecta? :laugh: :laugh: Oh, that's classic! And, yes, the paso finos - I'd almost forgotten the purpose of their trip (or, at least, Wes's purpose for their trip ;) ) !
I have to admit that I'm looking forward to Ellery meeting with the detective. We'll be seeing some more "classic" Ellery, I'm sure! Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
another chapter! Jeremy has something on his mind.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/282795.html
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