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mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on November 30, 2008, 08:49:06 pm ---and here is chapter 29!

Will you all forgive me if we get a bit of a mystery/crime mixed in with our story now?

http://louisev.livejournal.com/283222.html

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Nothing to forgive, Louise.  They wouldn't be the real Ellery and Colson if trouble didn't follow them, or if the phone didn't keep interrupting them, no matter how far from home they are!  :laugh:

Poor, sweet, earnest Jeremy!  He was so worried.

Tell Wes hi an don’t call me neither.”

I'd like to hear that conversation!  LOL!  And this should also be an interesting night at Rich's....

Thanks!
Marie

louisev:

--- Quote from: mariez on November 30, 2008, 09:44:41 pm ---
Nothing to forgive, Louise.  They wouldn't be the real Ellery and Colson if trouble didn't follow them, or if the phone didn't keep interrupting them, no matter how far from home they are!  :laugh:

Poor, sweet, earnest Jeremy!  He was so worried.

Tell Wes hi an don’t call me neither.”

I'd like to hear that conversation!  LOL!  And this should also be an interesting night at Rich's....

Thanks!
Marie

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and if you didn't notice, the phone calls aren't catching them in the middle as much as right before!

louisev:
ok folks.  I have figured out who the love interest for Paula is going to be!!! muah hahahaha ! Stay tuned.

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 04, 2008, 02:03:35 am ---ok folks.  I have figured out who the love interest for Paula is going to be!!! muah hahahaha ! Stay tuned.

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Well, the "muah hahahaha" has me racking my brain, Louise!  Unless it's someone we haven't met before?

I'm happy for Paula, but maybe I'm being presumptuous.   :-\

Marie

louisev:

--- Quote from: mariez on December 05, 2008, 03:37:15 pm ---Well, the "muah hahahaha" has me racking my brain, Louise!  Unless it's someone we haven't met before?

I'm happy for Paula, but maybe I'm being presumptuous.   :-\

Marie

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you keep wracking, Marie!  I am going to try to work on the chapter tonight.

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