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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 27, 2009, 03:56:47 pm ---
Holy Mother of God, Louise. ;D
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hehehehe... couldn't do that twice in a day!
louisev:
And now for the aftermath:
chapter 46: http://louisev.livejournal.com/287742.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on February 28, 2009, 07:14:10 pm ---And now for the aftermath:
chapter 46: http://louisev.livejournal.com/287742.html
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SPOILERS
“That was about the happiest thirty seconds a my life, Colson
Awww, Ellery.
Now it seems like I can love you an it’s a normal thing, not somethin I got ta hide from everybody. It makes me, I dunno... proud, I guess.”
This was a beautifully written chapter, Louise. It's always so touching when Colson has these kind of watershed moments. Thank you!
Marie
louisev:
awww, thanks!!! Of all the stories I've written, I have spent more time during this one thinking about Colson and Ellery's relationship with one another, and their attitudes and feelings, and how they have evolved. This story I feel as though I sent into slow motion - as vacations sometimes seem - in order to bring a close up focus to the two of them.
belbbmfan:
hey Louise, I need to do some catching up. We got back from our holiday in the French Alps yesterday. I see you've been busy typety typing.
*applauds Louise*
and having read this:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 27, 2009, 03:56:47 pm ---
Holy Mother of God, Louise. ;D
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I'm off to read. :)
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