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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
chapter 7 is up!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/277334.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on September 28, 2008, 04:11:24 pm ---chapter 7 is up!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/277334.html
--- End quote ---
SPOILERS
"You said you didn’t want ta know the details. He is a passionate an skillful lover an pleasured me with virtuoso skill."
:laugh: :laugh: Well, that'll teach, Wes. If you don't want to know, don't ask! And I'm also glad that Ellery pointed out that not everyone wants to spend Sunday afternoon with their boss and his wife - even if they are a lovely couple like Wes and Edna.
Louise, taking the boys out of Greenlea County is such a great idea. Poor Colson, having spent his entire life in Arizona, visiting Calfornia for the first time is a bit of a baptism by fire. And they haven't even hit the gay bars yet! I'm really enjoying this, Louise. Thanks!
Marie
louisev:
I am glad you're liking it. I think you can see already that Ellery, now not constrained by the propriety of his position as a police officer, nor by the social conventions that keep him from being gay in the world at large, has every intention of dragging Colson out of the closet with him, if only for the duration of their vacation, and it is not going to be easy.
louisev:
Bonus gay bar chapter!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/277696.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on September 28, 2008, 07:07:48 pm ---Bonus gay bar chapter!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/277696.html
--- End quote ---
Love when you're on a roll, Louise!
SPOILERS
I remember when Nick first showed up he made a remark to Jeremy about the word "queer" still being used in Tourmaline so I thought that was an interesting conversation and a good point to bring up.
I had to laugh at Colson asking about "transvestals" but the fact that they've traveled all the way to California only to enounter another shrieking "Wayne" is absolutely hilarious! :laugh: Not sure it'll do much to improve Colson's mood though.... it might make him feel more at home, but not in a good way! LOL! Great stuff, Louise. Thanks.
Marie
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