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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
belbbmfan:
Okay, I started reading chapter 7 and I've gotten this far:
SPOILERS
“Well I guess we’ll see how it goes. Everythin okay with Colson?”
“You said you didn’t want ta know the details. He is a passionate an skillful lover an pleasured me with virtuoso skill.”
“I’m hangin up on you now.”
“Good, that means I can finish my spare ribs. Have a good night, Sheriff.”
What can I say? :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Okay, now on with the rest. :)
louisev:
Ellery's got his vacation attitude on!
belbbmfan:
Now if only Colson could find his vacation attitude! I have a feeling that another Wayne won't help much in that department. :laugh:
I'm really enjoying this Louise. It's fun to read.
:)
louisev:
Chapter 10!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/278162.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on September 29, 2008, 09:20:29 pm ---
Chapter 10!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/278162.html
--- End quote ---
SPOILERS
Don’t you gay homosexuals all go for that stuff?”
As opposed to the straight homosexuals, right? LOL!
“Only got em ta dance one time.”
What did I miss? Did they dance sometime while I wasn't looking?
But, oh my. Colson is so tense and having a tipsy Ellery to deal with in public isn't helping to relax him any and now he's smoking again! Good thing they had some getting fancy time earlier....
More great stuff, Louise - thanks!
Marie
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