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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise hussein van hine on October 26, 2008, 10:57:47 pm ---okey doke!
At last, a chapter 20!!! I took a nap when I arrived in Rawlins, WY, and I still feel a bit rubbery, but I have logged 1000 miles in two days! Holy cow! And eaten more tacos than I want to count!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/281056.html
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SPOILERS
Holy cow is right! Hope it was a good nap - and now I'm in the mood for mexican food!
So funny how Colson kept changing his mind about getting fancy - but the trip does seem to be doing him a lot of good despite all the interruptions and mishaps. No matter where they go, the telephone does seem to be their bane. I love how he told Ellery he wasn't ashamed and that he actually offered to go to the club! Way to go, Colson! :)
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
He is starting to feel that strange liberation that comes from being far away from the familiar and daring to do things he would never do otherwise. A step at a time. Which of course was what Ellery was hoping would happen!!!
louisev:
Okay, no more excuses, people. I'm moved in, I got the internet on, I got groceries bought, and I don't have to report to work till Monday... so tomorrow I have time carved out for a chapter of this story and find out what happens at Capri!
louisev:
The long awaited chapter 21!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/281228.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
Sevigny's father has a lot of money and that can be dangerous, since he won't mind wasting it just to cause trouble, and his lawyer won't mind dragging things out just to keep billing him.....
Funny that Edna's going to get a microwave out of this whole mess! LOL!
"Yer turned on by that,” Ellery accused once more.
“No I ain’t.”
:laugh: Uh oh. Well, that pesky 20% is bound to pop up every now and then, but looking on the bright side, I do recall that the last time it happened Colson was bound and determined to prove himself to Ellery, so .......
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
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