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In the Land of the Lotus Eaters: New Greenlea Tale

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louisev:
this should make you even happier!!!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/281764.html Chapter 23!

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on November 09, 2008, 06:56:54 pm ---this should make you even happier!!!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/281764.html Chapter 23!

--- End quote ---


Holy moly!!!!!

...a challenging smirk on his face.

Ellery knows what to expect when he gives that look, but Colson managed to surprise him, too, didn't he?  LOL!  And I'm sure Ellery, with his superior detective skills, will have no problem finding what he's looking for - but I'm wondering if he'll get Colson to accompany him on his shopping trip?  :laugh:  Great stuff, Louise!

Thanks,
Marie

louisev:
sooo just in case you folks haven't become so jaded by my surprise plot twists, complications and aggravations... this time the vacation is NOT a bust!  I couldn't do that to them again!

louisev:
 
And here is chapter 24!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/281890.html

belbbmfan:
SPOILER



Well, Paula sure managed to keep a cool head with that Thyssen character. He was insulting her a as a woman AND as a professional lawyer and she still kept it as civil as possible. Go Paula!

Gawd, the crap women had to take (and still have to take I guess) from imbeciles like that man! Grrrr

Good to hear Colson and Ellery will be able to enjoy their holiday for a little while longer. Thank you Paula and thank you Wes! And you too Louise.  :)  :)

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