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Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
marakeshsparrow:
--- Quote from: Lucise on August 10, 2006, 04:36:02 pm ---Jessy ~ The interlude chapter was great!
I was LOL in some places: the expired aspirin, the skunk game .. so funny!
Thank you lady! Great work! ;)
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Glad to hear you enjoyed it Lucise! It was my attempt at something funny and light hearted before more angst continued. It's good to hear everyone liked it, I thought some might think it a little bizarre...
And it really is bizarre, but bizarre can be good, no?
Lumière:
--- Quote from: marakeshsparrow on August 10, 2006, 07:08:21 pm ---Glad to hear you enjoyed it Lucise! It was my attempt at something funny and light hearted before more angst continued. It's good to hear everyone liked it, I thought some might think it a little bizarre...
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More angst ahead you say .. *deep sigh*
Bizarre?? Heck no!! ;)
Penthesilea:
--- Quote from: marakeshsparrow on August 10, 2006, 07:08:21 pm ---.....before more angst continued.
And it really is bizarre, but bizarre can be good, no?
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I second what Milli said: more angst? *very deep sigh* Don't get too hard on them and us.
I liked the interlude. The skunk, Ennis falling asleep (Jack:“I’ll tell you what, you owe me one big time in the mornin’.”)
I liked especially this snippet of dialogue:
“Jest consider it a endearment.”
Jack smiled wide. “All right. I can live with that.”
mvansand76:
I agree, I really liked how you used the dialogue to show us how comfortable they are to be together. Even if they have only known each other for a few weeks!
Penthesilea:
For all fans of LMTYD:
Chapter 18 is up! :) :) :)
Actually it's part 1 of chapter 18.
It's here:
http://marakeshsparrow.livejournal.com/23130.html#cutid1
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