Brokeback Mountain: Our Community's Common Bond > Brokeback Mountain Fan Fiction & Poetry

"The Tire Iron"- a telling of Jack's fate

<< < (2/2)

belgianboy:
Such a lovely story! You do indeed make the tire version believable, incorporating it so well into Jack's drunken demeanor. That's a feat, because I've always favored the gaybashing version. I love the pump, pump, pump sequences tied in to the hostility toward Ennis. So visceral, in the moment, puts the reader right there. And the ending, so poetic and touching. Great job!

Arad-3:
Beautiful.  that's all I can say as I'm fighting back the tears.

Artiste:
Jack was murdered because he was a gay man, and to-day he will be again because not only islamic and other radicals do not accept other humans, but the Pope does not accept gays neither, calling gays less important than wood! Shame!

Navigation

[0] Message Index

[*] Previous page