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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
scudder:
Where is the patio? My impression is that someone parking in the driveway could go around the right side of the house (stage left) and see who was there. Also, I had the idea that the patio was off the master bedroom. Could the garage be detached with the pathway between it and the house? I also thought the master bedroom opened directly onto the living room. Remember Ennis opened the door naked coming from a shower when The young bartender was there talking to Ellery. I think the master bedroom should be where the dining room and kitchen are and the dining room and Kitchen should be where bedroon 1 and 2 are and these bedrooms should be where the master bedroom is. And I assume the garage is for one car? I can't manipulate things like you Leslie or I would try to sketch it out.
MaineWriter:
The depth of my obsession (this is probably TMI but who cares?). I actually got dragged out of the house yesterday to get off the computer for a few hours and go out to lunch and then a movie. So, while I am in the restaurant, I am looking around and this guy comes in, and from the back, he looks like Ellery (not the front). Black hair, right length, wearing a dark shirt. So..with my new cellphone, which I have barely figured out how to use, I take a picture of the guy! I mean, am I losing my marbles? (No, they were gone long ago.). Here he is...
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: scudder on June 25, 2006, 06:51:44 pm ---Where is the patio? My impression is that someone parking in the driveway could go around the right side of the house (stage left) and see who was there. Also, I had the idea that the patio was off the master bedroom. Could the garage be detached with the pathway between it and the house? I also thought the master bedroom opened directly onto the living room. Remember Ennis opened the door naked coming from a shower when The young bartender was there talking to Ellery. I think the master bedroom should be where the dining room and kitchen are and the dining room and Kitchen should be where bedroon 1 and 2 are and these bedrooms should be where the master bedroom is. And I assume the garage is for one car? I can't manipulate things like you Leslie or I would try to sketch it out.
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I think it has been mentioned a couple of times that the patio is off the dining room. No mention of a door in the bedroom, just a window. And when they were getting shot at, they crawled down the hall on their knees. The floor plan I posted has a little hall, not too long.
Whenever Louise gets back from her concert, she'll set us straight. LOL
MaineWriter:
This one needs no explanation...
scudder:
I wonder if someone could put a picture of Jack and Ellery side by side?
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