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MaineWriter:
A new chapter is posted:

Chapter 3: Persuasion in the AM

http://lazylfarm.livejournal.com/20514.html

Enjoy....as always, feeback is welcome.

Leslie
MaineWriter

twistedude:
I'm AGIN it, the pierfcing (see cvomment--on LJ---but the topic of converwsation seems to have dhanged anyway. At least for the timer being..

I have to go talk to Esme...fun!

MaineWriter:
For anyone who is interested, this is the article that Ennis "stumbled" across on the Internet.

 J Adv Nurs. 2005 Mar;49(5):474-84. Self-reported characteristics of women and men with intimate body piercings.  Caliendo C, Armstrong ML, Roberts AE.

Leslie
MaineWriter

tamarack:
I have to be careful what I read here. We need a way to discuss the chapters without someone stumbling into something they haven't read yet!  :)

Leslie, I was so glad to see the updates. I've only had Chapter 1 for so long that I started reading it again so I could go into 2 and 3 and remember where we were. However, I haven't even gotten through the peanut butter sandwiches on Don Wroe Day and my eyes are so full of tears that I can't even see the words, so I'm trying this instead! I love your writing. Everything is so "probable" and so sweet for the boys.

I'm going to visit a friend in Connecticut on Thursday - she hasn't seen the movie yet (?!?!) so I'm taking the DVD and DVD player with me. I haven't watched it in a while because I was just tired of being sad, but I've been wondering if I'm going to feel even sadder now that the fan fics have laid it all out there and shown what a sweet life they really could have had. The loss may seem even more tragic this time around.  :'(

Anyway, I'm going back to your story and see if I can do any better. I'm looking forward to discussing it with everyone if I could just get through it!  :-*

JennyC:
Well well Leslie, I almost fell off my chair laughing when I read what's on Ennis' mind.  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I should know that you will work that idea into your story eventually.  It's too good to let it pass, isn't it?  I think Ennis did a very good job in getting Jack on board.  ;)  Thanks for the nice reading.  It's always fun to read how Ennis articulates what's on his mind.

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