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Through the Veil of Time
opinionista:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on February 04, 2007, 06:44:56 pm ---Super Bowl Sunday and your author is hard at work...LOL
Through The Veil Of Time
Chapter 31. Making More Memories
Enjoy, everyone. Comments and feedback are welcome, as always.
Hugs,
Leslie
MaineWriter
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Where's the link?
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: opinionista on February 04, 2007, 06:50:21 pm ---Where's the link?
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Fixed! Thanks Natali...
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mariez:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on February 04, 2007, 06:44:56 pm ---Super Bowl Sunday and your author is hard at work...LOL
Through The Veil Of Time
Chapter 31. Making More Memories
http://lazylfarm.livejournal.com/29125.html
Enjoy, everyone. Comments and feedback are welcome, as always.
Hugs,
Leslie
MaineWriter
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LOL! And we appreciate it!
Leslie, it's -21 degrees outside, but this chapter left me with such a feeling of warmth and hope!! You've handled K.E.'s awakening so beautifully . . . how could anyone deny the truth of Jack and Ennis's love.
Thank you, Leslie - another amazing chapter.
Marie
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on February 04, 2007, 06:44:56 pm ---Super Bowl Sunday and your author is hard at work...LOL
Through The Veil Of Time
Chapter 31. Making More Memories
http://lazylfarm.livejournal.com/29125.html
Enjoy, everyone. Comments and feedback are welcome, as always.
Hugs,
Leslie
MaineWriter
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Leslie,
I just love your guys so much. ~~~ sigh
The interaction between them is so beautiful and rings so realistic. I loved this part:
He turned to Ennis for a more enthusiastic hug, then said in a loud stage whisper, easily heard by most of the guests, “Told ya so.”
“You sure did, but ya won fair and square, with the people votin’, no one can accuse ya of bribin’ the judges.”
“Sleepin’ with, more like,” said Jack, this in a very soft whisper directly in Ennis’s year, who, as he heard the words, blushed bright red to the roots of his hair.
I swear I can see them on stage having that conversation. lol
And this one too:
“Now don’t go butterin’ me up with hugs and kisses,” he said, “because I ain’t dancin’ with ya when the band arrives…”
“Ah, En…” Jack sighed.
“I could tell that’s what you were doin’.”
“Just one lil dance?”
I can so see Jack's face...almost pouting...asking for just 'one lil dance...' :)
Your J & E keep me smiling for days. Thank you!
C*
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karen1129:
I loved the "I told you so" A little crowing on Jack's part is appropriate ! LOL
KE catching E & J in a sweet intimate moment. This is love he sees here.
A love that has lasted 30 years.
Leslie, this story always puts a smile on my face, and warms my heart.
Love you,
Karen
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