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Through the Veil of Time
opinionista:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on February 19, 2007, 01:28:47 pm ---Update!
Through The Veil Of Time
Chapter 32. The End of the Day
http://lazylfarm.livejournal.com/29227.html
for those who prefer reading on fanfiction.net
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3023375/32/
Warning: the latter half of this chapter might be considered not work safe....
Enjoy!
Leslie
MaineWriter
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Finally! LOL
mariez:
I was just thinking this morning that I'd love a TTVOT update - and here it is - and on my lunch hour, too! :)
You've really outdone yourself, Leslie- and that's saying something. I loved this:
“This was quite a day,” he said. “You happy?”
I love that that was Ennis's first thought - Jack's happiness! And we know Ennis's happiness is always first in Jack's mind, too.
How wonderfully loving and generous of Jack to think of K.E. staying on - what a bittersweet reunion Ennis has had with him.
--- Quote from: Scott on February 19, 2007, 01:39:24 pm ---Hell...that wasn't safe for anywhere...I'll just sit here for a while, till things have calmed down.
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I think Scott said that best. Hawt Damn - love when those boys break out the toys!
Thank you!!!
Marie
haunted_by_bbm:
My heart just sped up...
Jack smiled up at Ennis. “Well, thanks, babe. Remember the first time?”
“Up on Brokeback? Sure, I’ll never forget.”
“I walked into that tent and you were sittin’ there naked…you looked so young.”
“We were young…just two kids, forced ta grow up fast.”
Jack brushed his hand along Ennis’s jaw, letting it slide down onto his shoulder. “I had wanted ta blow ya for days, and I was too fuckin’ scared ta ask…and then, ya told me with yer eyes…”
“Our eyes did a lot of the talkin’ in the old days…”
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Leslie!!! :)
Okay, either I'm totally crazy, or "your boys" just did a mini flashback to "my boys." hehehe So, if I am crazy, just ignore me and read on to the next comment from the next reader. lol But if I'm not crazy, let me tell what you just did! :)
For just a moment, reading your story, I got to have something I'll never be able to write. Just for a moment, I got to see my J & E older and together and happy, because it felt so right that the two stories were tied together. :) :) :) So you gave me something I'll never be able to write myself.
I got a glimpse of the happy ending. :)
That probably makes no sense at all. lol
But I feel like you just connected our two stories.
( ~~~ I wish I could do what you do ~~~~ I wish I could write an AU and give them what they deserve )
But you did it for me. Thank you! :)
Love ya, sweetie!
C*
MaineWriter:
Hey C* it was a shout out to your story because I read it, and read it, and read it again...and that last part, that seventh day, I couldn't get it out of my head. And it was so perfect and so wonderful that I figured on this wonderful day, they'd remember that wonderful day...
I meant it as a compliment, sweetie...glad you took it that way!
Love ya back,
Leslie
xo
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on February 19, 2007, 02:22:33 pm ---Hey C* it was a shout out to your story because I read it, and read it, and read it again...and that last part, that seventh day, I couldn't get it out of my head. And it was so perfect and so wonderful that I figured on this wonderful day, they'd remember that wonderful day...
I meant it as a compliment, sweetie...glad you took it that way!
Love ya back,
Leslie
xo
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YAY!!! I'm not totally crazy! hehehe
(Just a little bit obsessed with our boys maybe...but hardly crazy. ;) ) lol
That was the highest compliment sweetie, especially coming from you.
You know how much I love your story. :D
Thanks again. I'm gonna be grinning all day. :D
C*
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