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"Nightfall" by "Living in Transcendence"
littleguitar:
does anyone know when this might update?? I found it right when ch. 9 was posted and I'm seriously dying for the next chapter!!
Companyofmen:
C'mon, Sheera, ' les ya wanna sit around tying Supermans all day...not that your other stories aren't great--ALL of them--but you have been negecting your German painter and caberet actor...'n they're in a heap a trouble.
twistedude:
--- Quote from: Companyofmen on November 30, 2006, 04:01:00 am ---C'mon, Sheera, ' les ya wanna sit around tying Supermans all day...not that your other stories aren't great--ALL of them--but you have been negecting your German painter and caberet actor...'n they're in a heap a trouble.
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(twistedude)
twistedude:
NEW CHAPTER UP---DEC. 24!
hey Sheera--LET US KNOW! New chapter of "Nightfall" is up...writing is great, situation ghastly....and a merry christmas to you, too! (No, PLEASE don't stop!)
I will give nothing away. I expressed my surprise and interest in my feedbacvk on ff. You seem to be more or less paralleling Breokeback Mountaqin in some things--which weren't nearly as clear before. Your writing gets better all the time. Like Truman Capote, it's like ice crystals...
By the way (I read all your feedbnack on ff, now that I CAN): if you want to say "I am cold" in German, without saying "to me is cold," you can also say "ich friere." It's pretty colloqial, and is more like "Brrr..it's cold out" than "I'm cold."
"Mir ist kalt" is what he would have said....the German speaker is right.
littleguitar:
I love the mood Sheera creates in this story. It really is beautifully written, one of the few fan fics that goes beyond. I hope we don't have to wait long for the next update. Please?? :)
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