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A Love Born From Steel - Ongoing Discussion
bbm_stitchbuffyfan:
Oh, how exciting.... :o
www.jlodown.com
twistedude:
I have to write it ALL OVER AGAIN? Oh well, it wasn't much.
Story is spreading out nicely, slowing down a bit. Tom sounds like he might be a good thing (and it's funny how he interacts with Ennis), and Lureen is yet to come.
Fast or slow, I like the diredction you're heading...
"Don't ask" sounded a bit off...
What I DON'T undertstand, is how 3-4 of you can take these best-beloved characters of all of us, and send them merrily off in the direction you choose for them to go,--and we all love it..
Wonders are not likely to cease soon.
MaineWriter:
Julie,
Thanks for this message (and the review over on fanfic). I appreciate it!
I debated about "Don't ask" and wrote it a few different ways, leaving it in and taking it out. I obviously left it in--because it completed the joke--but I do see your point.
Maybe in a future revision it will change. Meanwhile, chapter 5 is calling me. :)
Leslie
MaineWriter:
Chapter 5 is up and available for your reading pleasure
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2853224/5/
As always, comments and feedback are wlecome. Please consider leaving a review at the fanfic site. Thanks, everyone, for your ongoing support.
Leslie
dmmb_Mandy:
Thanks Leslie hunny, gonna read it in the marnin'! :-*
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