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ifyoucantfixit:



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Janice - I edited your line 8 slightly to make it fit this iambic pentameter stuff - 10 syllables!  This is hard.  Please don't hate me!  Change it some other way if you want to!  I just want to try it the 'right' way a time or two, see if we can do it!
 Kiss --Lynne

no worries,, Its just a game. :-\

Ellemeno:
Lynne, can we do another one, please?

:)

With apologies to Elizabeth Barrett Browning for the first line:


How do I love Jack?  Let me count the ways.

Kerry:

How do I love Jack?  Let me count the ways.
His radiant countenance, so sublime

Lynne:
How do I love Jack?  Let me count the ways.
His radiant countenance, so sublime
The depths of the seas at home in his gaze



--- Quote from: Ellemeno on December 29, 2008, 05:50:10 am ---Lynne, can we do another one, please?

:)

With apologies to Elizabeth Barrett Browning for the first line:


How do I love Jack?  Let me count the ways.
--- End quote ---

EBB would be honored!  ;)

ifyoucantfixit:


How do I love Jack?  Let me count the ways.
His radiant countenance, so sublime
The depths of the seas at home in his gaze
To the height, breadth, and width my heart can climb.

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