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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
And surprise surprise...
please read the "warning" notice about a slight change in genre here, but yes, there is a new Greenlea Tale coming, and you have my nightmares to thank for it!
New Story Announcement
http://louisev.livejournal.com/288008.html
http://louisev.livejournal.com/288382.html "The Persistence of Memory: Chapter 1"
louisev:
and... for those who need to get off the cliff just a tad:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/288667.html
but while I can assure everyone that Ellery is going to be okay, Ellery's words at the end of this chapter pretty much describe how things will be for the time being!
BBM-Cat:
This is MOST WONDROUS news! ;D Can't wait to delve into the newest tale! Thank you Louise!!
louisev:
--- Quote from: BBM-Cat on March 08, 2009, 07:01:42 pm ---This is MOST WONDROUS news! ;D Can't wait to delve into the newest tale! Thank you Louise!!
--- End quote ---
whoo wee! And here I thought people were getting bored with the "franchise"!
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 08, 2009, 07:25:33 pm ---whoo wee! And here I thought people were getting bored with the "franchise"!
--- End quote ---
No way! This is very exciting as well as intriguing.
SPOILERS
First, thanks for getting us off the cliff - a tad.
I found the first chapter so interesting in a number of ways. Esteban seems to want to talk to Dr. Caulfield about his issues, but I'm betting he's in the minority on that count. Also, the TAT (or at least the one picture we saw with the frowning man and the woman behind his shoulder) seems geared toward heterosexuals, which should make it very interesting when Dupree and Ellery get their turn ..... although it appears Ellery many not have his appointment for a while....
Holy Crap, Louise. The second chapter was amazing! Have you had an injury similar to Ellery's? Because that stream of consciousness was so real! I've never had a blunt force trauma to the head, but I have passed out and you described that feeling of forcing your way back into a conscious state so perfectly. And I really appreciated that, even in that condition, Ellery was so very Ellery, worrying about Colson and Dupree - and thinking Jes stop sayin okay, asshole.
.. it ain’t fuckin okay, an it won’t be okay for a long time ta come.
Oh my. Looks like we have to fasten our seat belts. Terrific start, Louise. Thanks!
Marie
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