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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
MaineWriter:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on March 10, 2009, 03:36:47 pm ---Louise, I can't believe you're into chapter 4 of a new story already!! :o
I've read chapter 1 and 2 during my lunch break and didn't have time to comment. I was going to wait untill this evening. But then I got some really bad news this afternoon, my sister in law has been diagnosed with bowlcancer and it has spread to her liver and lungs. This news has left us all shattered. I'm terrified thinking of what is to come. :(
But I wanted to tell you anyway, thanks for the new story. It's been great so far. I'm still reading.
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Oh Fabienne, that's terrible news! My thoughts and prayers and healing energy go out to all of you...especially your sister in law. How old is she? Is this Dirk's sister?
L
belbbmfan:
She's Dirk's younger brother's wife. We're all very close. They're part of the group of friends that we go on holiday with every year. She's only 44 years old, with two teenage daughters.
It's all so unfair...
louisev:
I hope this helps make you feel better...!
Chapter 5: http://louisev.livejournal.com/289396.html
belbbmfan:
Thanks Louise, I'll catch up later. :)
mariez:
(((((Fabienne))))) Here's a hug for today that I'm adding to yesterday's. We can't have too many.
--- Quote from: louisev on March 10, 2009, 09:43:00 pm ---Chapter 5: http://louisev.livejournal.com/289396.html
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SPOILERS
Wow - I keep using the words "compelling" and "fascinating" but this really is. I love getting inside the guys' minds like this and seeing everyone through each other's eyes.
What was Henry's thought about everything in the Sheriff's department leading to Ellery? Never more apparent than in the bizarre but utterly believable showdown between Esteban and Dupree. Poor Jeremy - that pool of blood is bringing forth all kinds of feelings inside of him. Looking forward to more. Thanks, Louise!
Marie
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