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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
And notes leading down to the fiasco! Chapter 103
http://louisev.livejournal.com/314369.html
mariez:
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And notes leading down to the fiasco! Chapter 103
http://louisev.livejournal.com/314369.html
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SPOILERS
Good typin, Dupree, you got a bright future in police administration
:laugh:
Oh, yeah, that's exactly what every young detective is dying to hear! I like how Wes told him not to pout - it's true that they're making lots of progress. But I think Jeremy might still be a little put out about not going to the hospital.
And what a smart Dr. Caulfield! Bringing food to hungry men is guaranteed to get him high marks and a lot of good will!
I like how forthright Wes is about his "coddling." I wonder what he'll say after the hypnosis! Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on June 23, 2009, 01:39:55 pm ---SPOILERS
Good typin, Dupree, you got a bright future in police administration
:laugh:
Oh, yeah, that's exactly what every young detective is dying to hear! I like how Wes told him not to pout - it's true that they're making lots of progress. But I think Jeremy might still be a little put out about not going to the hospital.
And what a smart Dr. Caulfield! Bringing food to hungry men is guaranteed to get him high marks and a lot of good will!
I like how forthright Wes is about his "coddling." I wonder what he'll say after the hypnosis! Thanks, Louise!
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Henry is no dope, and he's got many years' experience in dealing with police detectives under stress - that's his stock in trade. And no PhD psychologist can get one over on Wes Brown, particularly after he broke a case wide open - on a Sunday no less!!!
Cocky bastard, one might conclude.
louisev:
stay tuned for chapter 104 under construction at this hour. I'll have it done tonight.
louisev:
And now ... on the other side of town on this eventful Sunday...
http://louisev.livejournal.com/314697.html Chapter 104
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