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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on July 07, 2009, 11:58:27 am --- :laugh: You know who I'd like to see "on the couch"? Edna! There is a lot more to Edna than meets the eye, I think! Actually, the possibilities are endless for interesting clients in Tourmaline .....
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oh no, now a title has popped into my head: "Edna on the couch"!
clearly my job is getting too tedious for me if I start imagining things like this!!
louisev:
I'm working on the next chapter... this story just WON'T end! Actually it will... but not today.
louisev:
Here is chapter 114!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/317429.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 07, 2009, 09:40:51 pm ---
Here is chapter 114!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/317429.html
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SPOILERS
...the toilet water a the queer elite...
:laugh: Nicky has a way with words! But I was moved by his thoughts, and his insecurity is easy to understand. I don't doubt that Jeremy does have a bit of a "soulful puppy look" about him when Ellery is around. It wasn't so long ago that Jeremy was giving Colson some advice about being more sensitive to Ellery's needs - and if Colson didn't have his hands (and mind) full right now worrying and caring for Ellery maybe he could return the favor and give some advice back to Jeremy because he could use some, I think. The broken record litany is useless so long as he's sending mixed messages and being dismissive of Nick's feelings. I imagine Nick will be running into that emergency room like gangbusters ......
So many interesting threads to this story - I can't decide who I want to see next! Thanks, Louise.
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on July 07, 2009, 10:42:26 pm ---SPOILERS
I imagine Nick will be running into that emergency room like gangbusters ......
So many interesting threads to this story - I can't decide who I want to see next! Thanks, Louise.
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you are getting very good at predicting things, Marie! I wonder if that means I'm becoming predictable!
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