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Gift of Exile - first fanfic
Marge_Innavera:
--- Quote from: Bigheart on January 20, 2007, 12:12:45 pm ---Oh believe me, you don't want the storms and rain we've had here in Holland and Europe the last couple of days! A few of the houses rooftops were half blown off in my neighbourhood on Thursday!
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Oh, you're in Europe - choi oi!! I saw some footage of those storms; the wind was so strong it actually bumped an airliner catty-wompus as it was taking off. Even in the Midwestern US where we have monster storms, I don't remember one like that.
--- Quote ---I've read everything now and I just have to say that I'm so in love with the way you're writing this story. I was so pleased Ennis picked up that phone! And I must say, David's offer was a complete surprise to me! I can't wait for more on this :)
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Yeah, it was a surprise to Ennis, too; but David had been thinking about it all along, and so had Jack. ;)
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: Marge_Innavera on January 22, 2007, 10:57:22 am ---Oh, you're in Europe - choi oi!! I saw some footage of those storms; the wind was so strong it actually bumped an airliner catty-wompus as it was taking off. Even in the Midwestern US where we have monster storms, I don't remember one like that.
Yeah, it was a surprise to Ennis, too; but David had been thinking about it all along, and so had Jack. ;)
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That's one of the aspects I love so much about this story too :) You do that so so well.
notBastet:
--- Quote from: Bigheart on January 20, 2007, 12:12:45 pm ---That part just cut my heart out but it was so beautifully written.
Well I'll just have to post and leave more comments then! :)
Oh believe me, you don't want the storms and rain we've had here in Holland and Europe the last couple of days! A few of the houses rooftops were half blown off in my neighbourhood on Thursday!
I've read everything now and I just have to say that I'm so in love with the way you're writing this story. I was so pleased Ennis picked up that phone! And I must say, David's offer was a complete surprise to me! I can't wait for more on this :)
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I'm loving reading everyone's thoughts on this story.
June - I hope your roof is okay!!
I'm glad you're still committed to the story, Marcia... In an odd way, I find the slow pace reassuring.
mvansand76:
I read the last chapters, but I am still not able to comment....I guess it was that emotional..., maybe I need to read it again to be able to leave a coherent comment that Marge deserves....
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: notBastet on January 22, 2007, 07:38:08 pm ---
June - I hope your roof is okay!!
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Aw thanks, Kelly :-* I still have my roof although it is damaged here and there.
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