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If I Asked by Midwest-girl
LauraGigs:
DC = Dave Cullen!! DUH. :P Sorry — I should have known this! (I even wrote Dave a fan email several months ago.)
And I live in the Denver area too. I'll have to check that out again . . . thanks Mvansand.
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: lauragigs on August 10, 2006, 07:51:23 pm ---DC = Dave Cullen!! DUH. :P Sorry — I should have known this! (I even wrote Dave a fan email several months ago.)
And I live in the Denver area too. I'll have to check that out again . . . thanks Mvansand.
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No problem! ;D ;)
RouxB:
I just finished it and was quite impressed by the writing style. I, too, am distracted by the "accent" style of many fan fic stories because they are inconsistent, often hard to understand, not accurate and sometimes just downright stupid. Amy has done the best job of it that I've seen. The combo of If I Asked and Somebody New woud make the perfect man for me. ;D
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littleguitar:
--- Quote ---The combo of If I Asked and Somebody New woud make the perfect man for me.
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You and me both Ruby!
I love the Jack of Somebody New... there is just something about him, it's like he's the Jack from the movie but he's regained his confidence and become much more comfortable with who he is. That confidence is very sexy. And I love that she keeps his moustache ;)
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: littleguitar on August 15, 2006, 01:26:21 pm ---You and me both Ruby!
I love the Jack of Somebody New... there is just something about him, it's like he's the Jack from the movie but he's regained his confidence and become much more comfortable with who he is. That confidence is very sexy. And I love that she keeps his moustache ;)
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I agree, that especially showed in the last chapter where he is talking to Ennis in the alley and kicks the wall and shouts No! when Ennis offers to try the fishing trips again. I really felt that and only the fact that I was on a train prevented me from shouting YEEEAAAAH! That was the best dialogue in the whole story. He is a slightly more confident and fearless Jack and I liked that a lot.
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