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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
louisev:
....and - chapter 4!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/321706.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
Most of the time I eat lunch at my desk out of a Tupperware bowl...
:laugh: :laugh: At this very moment, I am eating lunch at my desk out of a Tupperware bowl, which I also do most of the time.
Nice to see they're finding more things in common, and I like how honest Henry was in admitting to the deficiencies in his mind-reading skills! :laugh:
And I see Henry takes his Boy Scout training seriously. Not only is he true to his "Scout's honor," he follows the official motto to always "Be Prepared." :laugh: Wonderful dialogue! Thanks, Louise.
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on July 30, 2009, 01:44:19 pm ---SPOILERS
Most of the time I eat lunch at my desk out of a Tupperware bowl...
:laugh: :laugh: At this very moment, I am eating lunch at my desk out of a Tupperware bowl, which I also do most of the time.
Nice to see they're finding more things in common, and I like how honest Henry was in admitting to the deficiencies in his mind-reading skills! :laugh:
And I see Henry takes his Boy Scout training seriously. Not only is he true to his "Scout's honor," he follows the official motto to always "Be Prepared." :laugh: Wonderful dialogue! Thanks, Louise.
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uh oh, don't tell me there's an army of prosecutors out there with Tupperware bowls in the mini-fridge in the DA's office!?
hahahah. and thank you, Marie - I'm not sure what I'd do without your daily comments on my chapters!
Okay super spoiler here: during my insomnia of Sunday night I was mulling over the possibility or likelihood of Paula, Henry, or the both of them, having unprotected sex, even if only once, and I played out the entire story line in my head.
And then I backed out and thought... there is NO WAY a 30 year old woman with that much law school behind her and a good job, PLUS a single 40 year old local man with a long history of comfortable bachelorhood, would ever come together to throw caution to the wind in a moment of passion.
But tell me I'm wrong here.
louisev:
And now for chapter 5.. Reynolds, late of the Calico Cat brigade, comes into his own.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/322004.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 30, 2009, 09:49:45 pm ---And now for chapter 5.. Reynolds, late of the Calico Cat brigade, comes into his own.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/322004.html
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SPOILERS
Stellar dialogue between and among everyone! Nice to see that Carol had a date.
It'll be interesting to see just how low Stevens keeps his head. I think it would be fascinating to watch Henry deal with him. Reynolds absolutely cracks me up - brightening at the request to clean the coffeepot! :laugh: Every office needs (and usually has) a Reynolds. Mighty interesting sequel you've already got going here. Thanks, Louise!
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