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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on August 01, 2009, 01:29:28 pm ---Uh oh. :laugh:
SPOILERS
It's always nice to listen in on Colson and Edna's coffee break chats. They both love Ellery so, and I like that Colson is able to get a little "mothering" himself.
Sticky situation with Katie Ann and Laura. Laura is still her mother, after all, and little Stevie her brother. And from the sounds of it, the chances of big Steve taking time off of work to care for Laura or his son are nil. I just hope she isn't roped into staying there too long. Helping out for a couple of days is one thing, but taking on Steve and Laura's responsibilities long-term is another! And, somehow, I think Pam is going to enjoy being "adopted" by Jeremy and Nick and getting undivided attention from Colson and Edna. If Katie Ann gets wind of that, I'll bet she hightails it back to Tourmaline - "toot sweet," as Wes would say! :laugh: Thanks, Louise!
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you might have a point! But there's more plot to unfold here, as you might imagine...!
louisev:
Okay so it's technically Sunday, but not by much!
Chapter 7!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/322397.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on August 02, 2009, 01:23:12 am ---Okay so it's technically Sunday, but not by much!
Chapter 7!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/322397.html
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SPOILERS
These two are so great together. In some ways, Nick is still young - but he's also smart as a whip and very insightful. Not much gets past him. He'll make a great investigative report. And he could give Ellery a run for his money in the colorful language department!
So what’s the deal, you show up an hobble around the office, just ta make sure somebody else don’t piss on yer fire hydrant is that it?”
:laugh: But Jeremy has a point that he's not your typical rookie. He'd be very pleased to know that Ellery already pointed that out to Wes.
Nick leaned in and chucked him under the chin. “Cause I’m the only one that listens ta every word ya say an actually gives a shit about all of it, ain’t that so? There’s a reason why I’m jealous a anybody who pays you too much attention, cause I want ta be the one doin it.”
Awwwwww. There's his "Nicky" again.
Hmmmm... when that happens it means they got laid, sweet thing. Don’t be so naive.”
:laugh: Yeah, he doesn't need his "investigative reporter" skills to suss that one out! Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
Looks like Nicky and Jeremy are the all-time favorite secondary characters in this series, by golly!!!
louisev:
whoo wee! I got a nap and am now back on track!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/322906.html Chapter 8
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