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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on August 03, 2009, 12:45:27 am ---
whoo wee! I got a nap and am now back on track!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/322906.html Chapter 8
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SPOILERS
A very energizing nap from the looks of this chapter! Wes sure took the (hot) air out of Stevens' balloon in short order, didn't he? :laugh: Was that ever a lot of fun to read! And it was so great that he made it clear that all the staff is to be respected - including Carol. Just as there is always a Reynolds, there are always some Stevenses, too.
Next up - "hocus pocus" expert, Dr. Henry Caulfield. Now, that should be an interesting meeting. ;D
And now I have to go refresh my memory about Drew. Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on August 03, 2009, 01:04:18 pm ---SPOILERS
A very energizing nap from the looks of this chapter! Wes sure took the (hot) air out of Stevens' balloon in short order, didn't he? :laugh: Was that ever a lot of fun to read! And it was so great that he made it clear that all the staff is to be respected - including Carol. Just as there is always a Reynolds, there are always some Stevenses, too.
Next up - "hocus pocus" expert, Dr. Henry Caulfield. Now, that should be an interesting meeting. ;D
And now I have to go refresh my memory about Drew. Thanks, Louise!
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oh there's going to be some hocus pocus, that's for damn sure!
louisev:
Meanwhile, some down home Edna goodness!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/323207.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
Edna goodness, for sure! That fruit salad sounds delicious. And Ellery seems to be getting back on track, slowly but surely.
Ol Katie Ann there, I think the real reason she skipped town back to her Momma’s is because she was settin her cap for Dupree an her sister ratted her out.”
*slaps forehead* Of course. Why didn't I think of that. I wonder how receptive Katie Ann will be to Edna talking to her about it - she'll be more diplomatic than Pam, but still ... the realization that she was being so obvious and that the issue is being discussed among the rest of the family has to make her embarrassed and uncomfortable.
Oh no! about the poor mare. The string of bad luck with medical issues has spread to the animals now. Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on August 05, 2009, 12:31:03 pm ---SPOILERS
Edna goodness, for sure! That fruit salad sounds delicious. And Ellery seems to be getting back on track, slowly but surely.
Ol Katie Ann there, I think the real reason she skipped town back to her Momma’s is because she was settin her cap for Dupree an her sister ratted her out.”
*slaps forehead* Of course. Why didn't I think of that. I wonder how receptive Katie Ann will be to Edna talking to her about it - she'll be more diplomatic than Pam, but still ... the realization that she was being so obvious and that the issue is being discussed among the rest of the family has to make her embarrassed and uncomfortable.
Oh no! about the poor mare. The string of bad luck with medical issues has spread to the animals now. Thanks, Louise!
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I knew you'd figure that there was a theme of "everybody has an accident/injury/illness simultaneously" going here first, Marie! The fact things like this don't ever seem to happen to Edna or Wes is also part of the plot!
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