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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on August 08, 2009, 08:52:33 pm ---Okay, here is chapter 11!
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3447/3801044188_eb922423d6.jpg
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Cool picture, Louise - but I think this is the link you meant to post :) :
http://louisev.livejournal.com/323678.html
SPOILERS
Ah, great to see Henry with a spring in his step! ;D Wes made me laugh with his second “How’s the ADA?” And I like Henry more and more each chapter. He not only knows his stuff, he obviously makes it his business to educate himself in ways that will help him do his job well, i.e., Mormon history.
"I want ya ta go over an see Ellery Cantrell an find out why he is actin like such a loud angry sumbitch...."
:laugh: Well, part of just comes with being Ellery Cantrell, I think. But I take Wes' point .....
And so it begins, Henry thought to himself.
Indeed. I take it as a positive sign that Reynolds wanted Henry's professional opinion - and that he wants the "long answer." At least he's not taking Stevens' word for it! ::) More and more it looks like Henry was hired none to soon! This sequel is shaping up to be as fascinating as "The Persistence of Memory" and that's no small feat! Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
heheheh good catch on the link! I'm not tired am I?
louisev:
....and.... chapter 12!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/324131.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on August 09, 2009, 05:25:56 pm ---....and.... chapter 12!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/324131.html
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SPOILERS
Maybe it's just as well Jeremy is off for a couple more days - there's enough tension in the office as it is! And, oh my, I'm afraid Stevens is going to be in for a rude awakening if he's looking for an ally in Henry against the sundry riff-raff and sinners among them.
“I do all the venial sins,” Esteban said. “If I didn’t I’d be dead now. No wonder Stevens is such a sumbitch. I would be if I didn’t either.”
:laugh: :laugh: Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on August 10, 2009, 01:10:00 pm ---SPOILERS
Maybe it's just as well Jeremy is off for a couple more days - there's enough tension in the office as it is! And, oh my, I'm afraid Stevens is going to be in for a rude awakening if he's looking for an ally in Henry against the sundry riff-raff and sinners among them.
“I do all the venial sins,” Esteban said. “If I didn’t I’d be dead now. No wonder Stevens is such a sumbitch. I would be if I didn’t either.”
:laugh: :laugh: Thanks, Louise!
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oh yes, he could very well be....!
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