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Dreaming by Cathalin
welliwont:
Ha, you an me both Milli! We are kindred spirits, both Albertans an all.... :D I think that is the sweetest hottest love scene.... :-* :-*
Yeehaww!! ;D ;D
Lumière:
SPOILER ALERT................CHAPTER 12.............. ;)
AN EXCERPT:
Jack was still laughin’ when he started to strip off Ennis’ clothes, once in a while sayin’ “hard and fast,” and once Ennis said, “good thing fer me,” and then Jack dipped in ta’ lick where he’d unbuttoned Ennis’ shirt and Ennis couldn’t talk no more.
Ennis kept reachin’ for Jack, but he swatted his hands away, focused on each button, then licked where Ennis’ shirt parted and left an inch or two of skin showin’. He worked his way down slow, till all the buttons were open, then licked, all the way back up to Ennis’ neck, lickin’ there, then suckin’ on his neck. Ennis arched up into Jack’s mouth, ran his hands soft on Jack’s arms.
Jack was pullin’ the shirt to the sides, slow, and the fabric scrapin’ soft over his nipples made him shiver, somethin’ Jack spotted, ‘cause he leaned down to run that wicked tongue ‘round and over first one, then the other.
Ennis was thrustin’ into the air now, writhin’ under that tongue. Jack’s voice, hoarse with desire, said, “You always liked that,” and Ennis remembered wrestlin’ in the sun, Jack pinnin’ him down and playin’ with his nipples, Ennis never able ta’ admit what it did ta’’ him.
Now he could admit it, so he moaned “Jack,” and somethin’ changed in Jack at Ennis’ tone of voice, and he wasn’t playin’ around any more. He stripped Ennis’ shirt off him fast, fumbled with Ennis’ belt, but Ennis reached down, strippin’ his pants and shorts off quick, sayin’ “take off yer clothes, Jack.”
Then they was naked and Jack was lickin’ Ennis startin’ down at his ankle, lickin’ slow up one leg, sometimes movin’ over to the other. Ennis kept reachin’ with his hands, dyin’ to feel Jack’s skin, but he was too far away. He tried to sit up to reach for him, but Jack pressed a hand firm on his belly, pushin’ him down, said “lie down” and Ennis did.
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Hawt damn..and it only gets better from there too .. ;D
Daniel:
Goodness, ladies, if I had know you wanted scenes like that.....
Well, it would have required Dee's cooperation. :)
Penthesilea:
--- Quote from: mvansand76 on August 10, 2006, 07:08:17 am ---I don't really like the premise of HI and TCJ,
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And I didn't like the premise of "Dreaming", but loved the story anyway :)
--- Quote --- Didn't you all love the ending of Some Silver Lining? It was so clever!
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You bet!
And I love the ending of the first chapter of OTB: Jack just sitting there and taking it all in. On Brokebackslash maidenofthesea announced that the fourth chapter of OTB will be posted sometimes this weekend. Yeah :)
Penthesilea:
****SPOILERS for Dreaming in this post***
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--- Quote from: JakeTwist on August 11, 2006, 12:36:02 am ---Chapter 13 and 14 brought me down a little, and sad to say that there are only two chapters left to come, and then an epilogue. I thoulght it was sweet how Jack phoned from the road, and was oh so scared that Ennis was gonna pack it in and he was so vulnerable to his Ma, and she in turn was so sweet to Ennis. :-* That part was good. But the twist after that, on Jack's part, hmmm, I hope things torque back pretty damn quick!
J
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I second every thought of you. Jack calling from the road was so sweet. The girl's visit was great, but the twist after that was a downer.
It's hard to wait nearly a full month for the next installment. I'd prefer to read one chapter every two weeks instead of two chapters once a month. But sure this decicion is to cathalin and I won't complain.
Yes, it's sad that there are only two chapters plus an epilogue left.
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