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That Little Bit of Hope, Chapter 17 up!

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littleguitar:
Finally here  :D

Sorry bout the wait...

Angst warning!

http://minchout.livejournal.com/tag/that+little+bit+of+hope

dot-matrix:
Wooo hooo Mandy!  Another great chapter.  I left a more detailed reply on livejournal so I wouldn't spoil it for anyone here who hasn't read it yet.  More please, pretty please.    :-*

mvansand76:
Oh no Jack, why did you have to tell him? I know, it's all about honesty....  :( Maybe not the right timing though... Great chapter! I do hope that Jack gathers some more strength and starts to show some more backbone! I want him to kick some ass.  :o 

karen1129:
Great chapter Mandi.  Left you a comment on your LJ too.  I was on the edge of my seat.  Yeah, I kind of wish Jack would have held back on that honesty thing.... but.... guess there is no good time for something like that.  I can't wait to see where they are going now.... and if that bastard old man Twist is going to cause more trouble. 

Karen

littleguitar:
Thanks guys!! I appreciate all the comments  :D


--- Quote --- I do hope that Jack gathers some more strength and starts to show some more backbone! I want him to kick some ass.   
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LOL, I know I know, sorry John Twist didn't die a horrible death in this chapter... maybe the next one, I'm still trying to work it out  ;)

Jack does need to show some backbone though, I'm (or he's) working on it...  ::)

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