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That Little Bit of Hope, Chapter 17 up!
littleguitar:
who needs a teaser when you have the real deal right here??? ;)
Chapter 16 http://minchout.livejournal.com/13785.html
dot-matrix:
GOOD CHAPTER MANDY! ;D My heart was beating so fast when they were surrounded. That John Twist is an evil man telling that lie and setting those men out to kill his own son. But I was so proud...Jack stood up to them, and to his Daddy. Oh WOW. I was so touched when Ennis told Jack he was the strongest person he knew. So good! I swear I'm not being greedy but I hope it's not too long before we get the rest.....but no pressure :-*
littleguitar:
Thanks Dottie!! I think I really needed a proud of Jack moment... I don't know, this chapter had me really worried (melodrama, unbelievability...) but everyone seems to have liked it! I'm glad you did :D
And Mel better be out there somewhere, I wrote this chapter just for her ;)
notBastet:
--- Quote from: littleguitar on December 13, 2006, 11:29:11 pm ---who needs a teaser when you have the real deal right here??? ;)
Chapter 16 http://minchout.livejournal.com/13785.html
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spoiler
about to say something stupid, but i usually don't let that stop me...
maybe, in a way, it's good that the 'tire iron' came for them - thus they've faced it and survived, so now it's not looming over their heads. (of course, they're not 'safe' yet, I realize)
oh well - just looking for a silver lining.
great chapter mandy!
littleguitar:
--- Quote from: notBastet on December 14, 2006, 11:06:43 am ---spoiler
about to say something stupid, but i usually don't let that stop me...
maybe, in a way, it's good that the 'tire iron' came for them - thus they've faced it and survived, so now it's not looming over their heads. (of course, they're not 'safe' yet, I realize)
oh well - just looking for a silver lining.
great chapter mandy!
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)
And that isn't stupid... that makes sense to me :-*
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