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That Little Bit of Hope, Chapter 17 up!
mvansand76:
And of course good luck with all the other stories you are gonna write and continue (JBLAY anyone?)
:-*
littleguitar:
LOL, if you're real nice you might get a chapter of JBLaY before I go out for the night ;)
(That's if I can get this damn personal statement done...)
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: littleguitar on December 31, 2006, 01:42:43 pm ---I was wondering if anyone would say anything about that sex scene... I knew it would make a few people shudder. I'm with you, I don't think that it was the best move to make and yeah I think Bobby probably did need his dad at that point, even if he was the one to say something. I really don't have any explaination other than I think there was just so much tension after everything that happened that neither one of them could resist... they weren't thinking. I actually wrote a shower sex scene but it felt wrong... I don't know, I just kept thinking Bobby would wonder what they were getting up to in the shower together so I might as well go with my initial instinct and have them just wait till he's asleep.
(also, I find quiet sex incredibly erotic ::) ) :P
Thanks for the kind words everyone, I hope this last chapter wasn't too much of a let down. A few people didn't seem to expect it to end and I know that there is a lot that I didn't tie up. :-\
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Aww Mandy ~ in NO way was this last chapter a let down! Absolutely not! It was beautiful :) And the sex scene didn't make me shudder at all! :) And yeah, I definitely agree about the quiet sex :P I thought Ennis's hand over Jack's mouth was incredibly erotic ::)
So no worries and thanks again! :-*
Oh and I will have to read JBLaY in the morning! :) I SO need to sleep now! ::)
dot-matrix:
All I'm gonna say is I cried Mandy and they were good tears. Thank You. :-*
notBastet:
--- Quote from: littleguitar on December 31, 2006, 01:42:43 pm ---I was wondering if anyone would say anything about that sex scene... I knew it would make a few people shudder. I'm with you, I don't think that it was the best move to make and yeah I think Bobby probably did need his dad at that point, even if he was the one to say something. I really don't have any explaination other than I think there was just so much tension after everything that happened that neither one of them could resist... they weren't thinking. I actually wrote a shower sex scene but it felt wrong... I don't know, I just kept thinking Bobby would wonder what they were getting up to in the shower together so I might as well go with my initial instinct and have them just wait till he's asleep.
(also, I find quiet sex incredibly erotic ::) ) :P
Thanks for the kind words everyone, I hope this last chapter wasn't too much of a let down. A few people didn't seem to expect it to end and I know that there is a lot that I didn't tie up. :-\
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I'm a regular reader, but a late responder - I didn't think it was a let down at all!
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