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That Little Bit of Hope, Chapter 17 up!

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dot-matrix:
Just read Chapter 9!  All I can say is you blew me away totally.  I won't say any more so as not to spoil it for those who have not read it yet.  BUT Oh boy!  It was GREAT, just GREAT  :D

littleguitar:

--- Quote from: dot-matrix on October 16, 2006, 06:33:27 pm ---Just read Chapter 9!  All I can say is you blew me away totally.  I won't say any more so as not to spoil it for those who have not read it yet.  BUT Oh boy!  It was GREAT, just GREAT  :D

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Thanks! *blushes*   :D This chapter seems to have been a hit, I'm glad it worked for everyone  :)

mvansand76:
Oh yeah! I'm going to read it asap!

Is that a picture of you on your livejournal?

Bigheart:
SPOILER!!!
Mandy,

Chapter 9 was BEAUTIFUL *sigh* Ennis arrived at just the right time, my heart skipped a few beats when Jack realised it was Ennis at the door, wow.....that was soo lovely.

And the lying down next to him and refusing to leave and the gentle, loving tenderness in the bathroom was breathtaking, incredibly moving.

I do so wonder what will happen next. How will old man Twist react to Ennis being there? Are they staying? If not, where will they go??

I'm SO proud of Ennis and SO happy he's in Lightning Flat!  :)

Hope you update soon, Mandy  :)

littleguitar:

--- Quote from: mvansand76 on October 17, 2006, 07:51:11 am ---Oh yeah! I'm going to read it asap!

Is that a picture of you on your livejournal?

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Nope, though I had to double check because I used to have a pic of me on there and for a minute I forgot I took it down. That's actually Jake, looking ultra feminine. Now that I think about it... I used to have a haircut very similar, LOL
--- Quote from: Bigheart on October 17, 2006, 08:02:47 am ---SPOILER!!!
Mandy,

Chapter 9 was BEAUTIFUL *sigh* Ennis arrived at just the right time, my heart skipped a few beats when Jack realised it was Ennis at the door, wow.....that was soo lovely.

And the lying down next to him and refusing to leave and the gentle, loving tenderness in the bathroom was breathtaking, incredibly moving.

I do so wonder what will happen next. How will old man Twist react to Ennis being there? Are they staying? If not, where will they go??

I'm SO proud of Ennis and SO happy he's in Lightning Flat!  :)

Hope you update soon, Mandy  :)

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Thanks, June! I'm really glad you liked it so much. Jack very much needed Ennis at that moment and Ennis delivered. It almost turned out very very different... but I won't tell you how, I'll just leave it at what I wrote  ;)

I think "proud" is the perfect word, it was hard for Ennis to do what he did, especially given old man twist is ratteling around that ranch somewhere...

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