Brokeback Mountain: Our Community's Common Bond > The Lighter Side
The "ABCs of BBM": Round 965! (Rules in first post)
Sason:
Jack was smitten after their first night of passion, until the disconcerting and not reversible moment when Ennis left, nauseatingly indifferent.
Fran:
Ennis's breath came slow and quiet, he hummed, rocked a little in the sparklight and Jack leaned against the steady heartbeat, the vibrations of the humming like faint electricity and, standing, he fell into sleep that was not sleep but something else drowsy and tranced until Ennis, dredging up a rusty but still useable phrase from the childhood time before his mother died, said, "Time to hit the hay, cowboy. I got a go. Come on, you're sleeping on your feet like a horse," and gave Jack a shake, a push, and went off in the darkness.
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memento:
Jack was smitten after their first night of passion, until the telltale moment when Ennis left without saying a word.
southendmd:
Jack was smitten after their first night of passion, until the moment when and unresponding Ennis left.
Sason:
Jack was smitten after their first night of wondersome passion, until the moment when an unresponding Ennis left.
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