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David In Indy:
--- Quote from: midwest-girl on January 24, 2007, 10:23:24 am ---I'm glad you're still liking the story, Kerry. I suppose an author shouldn't point out her own flaws, but what the hell.... For those of you who've read the story...I messed up and gave both Ennis's mother and Jill (who Kerry hasn't met yet) gaps between their front teeth. Oops. I didn't even notice it until I re-read the whole story. That's one of the things I changed when I said I went back and cleaned up the story. Sorry!! That's what happens when you're trying to pound out a chapter a week. LOL. ;)
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I never noticed that Amy. But there's nothing wrong with little mistakes like this. Every movie and novel has them. :)
I sure would love to read the new Shades of Grey when you finish with it though! :D
Maybe you will share it with us someday?
David In Indy:
--- Quote from: Kerry on January 24, 2007, 07:54:50 am ---This isn't Heath, but he sure does come close to SoG Ennis for me:
I've got more of him, if you'd like to see them . . . .
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Kerry, that IS a good SoG Ennis! :)
That's exactly how I picture him too. Where did you find this picture?
mvansand76:
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mvansand76:
--- Quote from: midwest-girl on January 24, 2007, 10:23:24 am ---I'm glad you're still liking the story, Kerry. I suppose an author shouldn't point out her own flaws, but what the hell.... For those of you who've read the story...I messed up and gave both Ennis's mother and Jill (who Kerry hasn't met yet) gaps between their front teeth. Oops. I didn't even notice it until I re-read the whole story. That's one of the things I changed when I said I went back and cleaned up the story. Sorry!! That's what happens when you're trying to pound out a chapter a week. LOL. ;)
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Do you mean that you described it in the same way? Hey, never enough gaps, I love gaps between front teeth, but I need to because I have gaps between my front teeth myself. ;)
David In Indy:
WAY TO GO, MELISSA!!!!! :D :D
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,1579.2355.htm
And I feel really honored you decided to post your 1000th message in my thread too! :-* :-*
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