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Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
midwest-girl:
Chapter Eight is up at http://midwest-girl.livejournal.com Enjoy! ;)
one_of_one:
I was right - I needed paramedic assistance.
littleguitar:
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Squeeee!!!!!!!!! :D
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: one_of_one on October 13, 2006, 03:02:28 pm ---I was right - I needed paramedic assistance.
--- End quote ---
I know.......
The making out was truly wonderful, soo hot but oh so loving and special too. Like they were made for each other. I love both of them, they are perfect.
And the last lines, that ending. Oh Jesus, so soft and gentle......wow
Every thing about this chapter was perfection, the interview with Dane, the scene in the kitchen, the walk outside, just everything.
Amy, you truly are a goddess. I left you a looong comment on your journal, but I think you already know that ;D
:-*
Bigheart:
I also loved how insanely jealous Ennis was of Dane. My God, he nearly lost it in that interview room. I did get the feeling Dane really cares about Jack.
Ohhh, I LOVE this fic so much *SIGH*
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